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2019年10月19日 01:48

【担】【心】【什】【么】【,】【果】【然】【就】【来】【什】【么】【!】【我】【一】【脸】【茫】【然】【地】【盯】【着】【眼】【前】【一】【道】【难】【题】【,】【反】【复】【读】【了】【好】【多】【遍】【,】【却】【还】【是】【不】【能】【从】【中】【找】【到】【一】【丝】【答】【题】【的】【线】【索】【。】【眼】【下】【,】【只】【能】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【请】【教】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【我】【的】【好】【朋】【友】【来】【解】【决】【这】【道】【难】【题】【了】【。】

【我】【看】【了】【看】【这】【道】【题】【,】【发】【现】【并】【不】【难】【,】【便】【举】【起】【了】【双】【手】【。】【可】【是】【老】【师】【却】【把】【我】【忽】【略】【了】【,】【一】【次】【次】【闪】【过】【我】【举】【得】【高】【高】【的】【手】【,】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【有】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【能】【解】【答】【?】【没】【有】【?】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【这】【时】【我】【的】【手】【似】【乎】【想】【脱】【离】【我】【蹦】【到】【老】【师】【双】【眼】【前】【去】【。】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【那】【么】【老】【师】【随】【机】【点】【名】【,】【某】【某】【,】【你】【来】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【我】【的】【手】【便】【像】【蔫】【了】【的】【黄】【瓜】【垂】【了】【下】【来】【。】谈莉娜【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【这】【个】【成】【语】【,】【你】【知】【道】【是】【什】【么】【原】【因】【吗】【?】【这】【得】【从】【历】【史】【渊】【源】【说】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【远】【古】【时】【期】【,】【我】【们】【夜】【郎】【人】【的】【祖】【先】【过】【着】【日】【出】【而】【耕】【、】【日】【落】【而】【息】【的】【生】【活】【,】【男】【耕】【女】【织】【、】【结】【婚】【生】【子】【是】【他】【们】【人】【生】【的】【最】【大】【追】【求】【。】【辈】【辈】【代】【代】【繁】【衍】【下】【去】【,】【产】【生】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【夜】【郎】【文】【化】【,】【这】【是】【夜】【郎】【人】【的】【自】【豪】【与】【骄】【傲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【有】【了】【“】【夜】【郎】【自】【大】【,】【不】【知】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【之】【说】【,】【这】【反】【倒】【激】【发】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【辈】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【和】【自】【信】【心】【,】【他】【们】【对】【天】【外】【的】【天】【产】【生】【了】【好】【奇】【心】【。】【渴】【望】【着】【走】【出】【山】【去】【,】【看】【看】【天】【外】【的】【天】【到】【底】【是】【什】【么】【样】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【天】【,】【曾】【祖】【父】【问】【爷】【爷】【,】【夜】【郎】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【爷】【爷】【说】【在】【贵】【州】【。】【曾】【祖】【父】【问】【贵】【州】【有】【多】【大】【?】【爷】【爷】【说】【贵】【州】【有】【几】【十】【个】【夜】【郎】【大】【。】【曾】【祖】【父】【眯】【着】【双】【眼】【,】【琢】【磨】【了】【许】【久】【,】【无】【法】【想】【象】【,】【叹】【了】【口】【气】【说】【:】【“】【要】【是】【能】【走】【出】【去】【看】【看】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【该】【有】【多】【好】【。】【”】【曾】【祖】【父】【朝】【思】【暮】【想】【,】【想】【了】【几】【十】【年】【,】【最】【终】【没】【有】【见】【到】【天】【外】【的】【天】【。】【带】【着】【遗】【憾】【、】【带】【着】【期】【盼】【离】【开】【了】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【祖】【父】【走】【了】【,】【爷】【爷】【继】【续】【做】【着】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【梦】【,】【不】【同】【的】【是】【爷】【爷】【开】【始】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【立】【志】【实】【现】【他】【父】【亲】【的】【愿】【望】【。】【爷】【爷】【通】【过】【自】【己】【的】【研】【究】【和】【实】【践】【,】【终】【于】【实】【现】【了】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【他】【带】【着】【茅】【台】【酒】【,】【带】【着】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【自】【尊】【与】【自】【信】【,】【在】【巴】【拿】【马】【万】【国】【博】【览】【会】【上】【荣】【获】【金】【奖】【。】【从】【此】【夜】【郎】【誉】【满】【全】【球】【,】【让】【天】【外】【的】【人】【们】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【几】【何】【时】【,】【平】【坦】【的】【道】【路】【,】【发】【达】【的】【通】【信】【,】【为】【夜】【郎】【人】【架】【起】【了】【挑】【战】【世】【界】【的】【平】【台】【。】【爷】【爷】【问】【父】【亲】【,】【你】【知】【道】【天】【外】【有】【多】【大】【?】【父】【亲】【说】【天】【外】【还】【有】【天】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【父】【亲】【做】【着】【和】【爷】【爷】【同】【样】【的】【梦】【。】【父】【亲】【朝】【思】【暮】【想】【,】【勤】【学】【苦】【练】【,】【终】【于】【在】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【北】【京】【奥】【运】【会】【拳】【击】【4】【8】【公】【斤】【级】【比】【赛】【中】【获】【得】【金】【牌】【,】【让】【世】【界】【见】【证】【了】【夜】【郎】【男】【孩】【的】【奇】【迹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【这】【个】【成】【语】【,】【是】【因】【为】【它】【激】【发】【了】【我】【祖】【祖】【辈】【辈】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【与】【自】【豪】【感】【,】【激】【发】【了】【他】【们】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【、】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【的】【信】【心】【和】【勇】【气】【。】【他】【们】【让】【我】【受】【到】【了】【熏】【陶】【与】【教】【育】【,】【更】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【天】【有】【多】【大】【,】【心】【就】【有】【多】【大】【。】【同】【时】【,】【不】【要】【骄】【傲】【,】【随】【时】【想】【到】【自】【己】【的】【责】【任】【,】【才】【能】【为】【人】【类】【的】【进】【步】【与】【发】【展】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【构】【思】【奇】【特】【,】【托】【物】【言】【志】【。】【作】【者】【跨】【越】【时】【空】【,】【构】【思】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【孙】【四】【代】【人】【的】【梦】【想】【逐】【步】【实】【现】【的】【故】【事】【,】【演】【绎】【了】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【的】【特】【殊】【含】【义】【,】【借】【夜】【郎】【人】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【的】【信】【心】【和】【勇】【气】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【作】【者】【“】【天】【有】【多】【大】【,】【心】【就】【有】【多】【大】【”】【的】【心】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叙】【议】【结】【合】【,】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【。】【先】【以】【时】【间】【为】【线】【索】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【孙】【四】【代】【对】【“】【夜】【郎】【自】【大】【,】【不】【知】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【之】【说】【的】【挑】【战】【表】【现】【出】【来】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【、】【自】【豪】【感】【,】【以】【此】【为】【铺】【垫】【,】【然】【后】【发】【表】【议】【论】【,】【点】【明】【观】【点】【。】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【的】【原】【因】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【简】【练】【流】【畅】【,】【平】【中】【见】【奇】【。】【如】【曾】【祖】【父】【与】【爷】【爷】【的】【那】【段】【对】【话】【,】【用】【作】【者】【的】【口】【气】【表】【达】【出】【来】【,】【如】【话】【家】【常】【,】【蕴】【涵】【了】【“】【夜】【郎】【”】【神】【秘】【而】【悠】【远】【的】【历】【史】【背】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【宗】【明】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【故】【乡】【在】【太】【湖】【之】【滨】【的】【洞】【庭】【东】【山】【。】【那】【里】【不】【仅】【风】【光】【秀】【丽】【,】【而】【且】【出】【产】【闻】【名】【遐】【迩】【的】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【。】【碧】【螺】【春】【以】【它】【独】【特】【的】【色】【、】【香】【、】【味】【、】【形】【,】【赢】【得】【了】【人】【们】【的】【喜】【爱】【。】【有】【位】【外】【国】【诗】【人】【在】【品】【茶】【之】【余】【,】【还】【写】【下】【了】【这】【样】【的】【诗】【句】【:】【“】【在】【清】【香】【的】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【汤】【里】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【江】【南】【明】【媚】【的】【春】【光】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【碧】【螺】【春】【的】【故】【乡】【长】【大】【,】【我】【当】【然】【是】【品】【茶】【的】【行】【家】【,】【那】【茶】【的】【喝】【法】【与】【众】【不】【同】【,】【需】【要】【先】【倒】【开】【水】【,】【后】【放】【茶】【叶】【,】【杯】【子】【又】【不】【宜】【加】【盖】【,】【且】【头】【趟】【杯】【中】【只】【能】【倒】【1】【/】【3】【的】【温】【开】【水】【,】【待】【茶】【芽】【全】【部】【伸】【展】【后】【,】【再】【用】【开】【水】【把】【茶】【杯】【冲】【满】【,】【这】【样】【品】【起】【来】【才】【算】【上】【乘】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【茶】【季】【,】【我】【因】【身】【体】【不】【好】【,】【遵】【照】【医】【嘱】【从】【上】【海】【回】【到】【故】【乡】【休】【养】【。】【不】【想】【此】【次】【回】【故】【乡】【还】【大】【开】【了】【眼】【界】【,】【所】【见】【所】【闻】【使】【我】【感】【到】【自】【己】【原】【来】【对】【碧】【螺】【春】【还】【知】【之】【甚】【少】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【多】【年】【未】【能】【回】【去】【,】【难】【得】【与】【亲】【戚】【们】【相】【聚】【,】【大】【家】【都】【十】【分】【高】【兴】【。】【刚】【到】【的】【那】【天】【,】【伯】【父】【笑】【眯】【眯】【地】【说】【要】【做】【一】【道】【他】【拿】【手】【的】【时】【令】【名】【菜】【请】【我】【尝】【新】【,】【以】【表】【示】【对】【我】【的】【欢】【迎】【。】【我】【心】【中】【纳】【闷】【,】【东】【山】【春】【季】【名】【菜】【多】【着】【呢】【,】【是】【名】【贵】【的】【太】【湖】【莼】【菜】【、】【白】【煨】【羊】【肉】【,】【还】【是】【银】【鱼】【、】【青】【虾】【、】【甲】【鱼】【?】【只】【见】【伯】【父】【倒】【了】【大】【半】【杯】【温】【开】【水】【,】【抓】【一】【小】【把】【碧】【螺】【春】【放】【入】【杯】【中】【,】【茶】【叶】【全】【部】【伸】【展】【后】【,】【又】【把】【茶】【汤】【倒】【尽】【,】【然】【后】【掺】【入】【刚】【起】【锅】【的】【虾】【仁】【之】【中】【,】【他】【笑】【着】【介】【绍】【说】【:】【“】【这】【便】【是】【江】【南】【名】【菜】【—】【—】【碧】【螺】【虾】【仁】【,】【没】【尝】【过】【吧】【?】【”】【我】【趁】【热】【尝】【了】【一】【口】【,】【只】【觉】【得】【细】【嫩】【鲜】【美】【,】【爽】【口】【提】【神】【,】【令】【我】【食】【欲】【大】【增】【。】【餐】【桌】【上】【,】【伯】【父】【还】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【这】【碧】【螺】【虾】【仁】【比】【当】【年】【周】【总】【理】【宴】【请】【尼】【克】【松】【的】【龙】【井】【虾】【仁】【还】【要】【有】【名】【气】【,】【语】【气】【中】【充】【满】【了】【骄】【傲】【。】【我】【说】【,】【想】【不】【到】【碧】【螺】【春】【这】【名】【茶】【也】【能】【入】【菜】【,】【我】【真】【是】【口】【福】【不】【浅】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【午】【饭】【后】【,】【我】【提】【议】【去】【村】【东】【的】【翠】【峰】【坞】【踏】【青】【。】【伯】【父】【母】【正】【好】【没】【事】【,】【就】【陪】【我】【去】【了】【。】【那】【是】【我】【们】【东】【山】【著】【名】【的】【风】【景】【区】【。】【据】【史】【料】【记】【载】【,】【唐】【代】【的】【白】【居】【易】【、】【宋】【朝】【的】【范】【仲】【淹】【、】【范】【成】【大】【和】【明】【朝】【的】【唐】【、】【祝】【、】【文】【、】【徐】【四】【杰】【,】【游】【览】【翠】【峰】【后】【均】【留】【下】【动】【人】【的】【篇】【章】【。】【小】【时】【候】【,】【我】【在】【作】【文】【中】【就】【写】【过】【翠】【峰】【坞】【的】【游】【记】【,】【还】【受】【到】【老】【师】【的】【表】【扬】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【山】【坞】【里】【芳】【草】【如】【茵】【,】【溪】【水】【淙】【淙】【,】【不】【时】【有】【匆】【匆】【来】【去】【的】【采】【茶】【女】【从】【身】【旁】【走】【过】【。】【行】【至】【半】【山】【坡】【,】【忽】【见】【前】【面】【枇】【杷】【林】【中】【升】【起】【袅】【袅】【炊】【烟】【,】【我】【不】【觉】【一】【惊】【。】【走】【到】【林】【中】【一】【看】【,】【见】【一】【村】【姑】【依】【山】【而】【搭】【一】【石】【灶】【,】【正】【舀】【了】【锅】【山】【泉】【在】【煮】【茶】【。】【少】【顷】【水】【沸】【,】【她】【随】【意】【从】【茶】【篓】【里】【抓】【了】【一】【大】【把】【嫩】【芽】【放】【入】【沸】【水】【中】【,】【满】【锅】【顿】【时】【一】【片】【碧】【绿】【,】【清】【香】【四】【溢】【。】【采】【茶】【的】【女】【人】【们】【纷】【纷】【前】【来】【喝】【茶】【。】【村】【姑】【也】【舀】【给】【我】【们】【三】【人】【每】【人】【一】【碗】【,】【我】【正】【觉】【得】【有】【点】【口】【渴】【,】【便】【坐】【在】【石】【头】【上】【开】【怀】【畅】【饮】【。】【只】【觉】【得】【那】【茶】【汤】【又】【与】【家】【中】【喝】【到】【的】【不】【同】【,】【特】【别】【清】【香】【和】【甜】【润】【,】【眼】【睛】【似】【乎】【也】【清】【亮】【了】【起】【来】【,】【浑】【身】【舒】【服】【极】【了】【,】【禁】【不】【住】【又】【讨】【了】【一】【大】【碗】【喝】【。】【茶】【姑】【双】【颊】【飞】【红】【,】【抿】【嘴】【一】【笑】【说】【:】【“】【在】【上】【海】【喝】【不】【到】【吧】【?】【这】【叫】【清】【泉】【煮】【青】【茶】【,】【赛】【过】【活】【神】【仙】【,】【我】【们】【山】【里】【人】【称】【这】【茶】【为】【神】【仙】【茶】【。】【”】【她】【还】【给】【我】【背】【诵】【了】【一】【首】【唐】【伯】【虎】【所】【写】【的】【《】【翠】【峰】【游】【》】【:】【“】【自】【与】【湖】【山】【有】【宿】【缘】【,】【倾】【囊】【刚】【可】【买】【吴】【船】【。】【纶】【巾】【布】【服】【怀】【茶】【饼】【,】【卧】【煮】【东】【山】【悟】【道】【泉】【(】【翠】【峰】【坞】【一】【泉】【名】【)】【。】【”】【我】【也】【信】【口】【凑】【了】【两】【句】【:】【“】【饮】【了】【故】【乡】【神】【仙】【茶】【,】【不】【思】【上】【海】【愿】【留】【下】【。】【”】【众】【人】【听】【后】【大】【笑】【,】【伯】【母】【也】【说】【,】【如】【果】【不】【是】【为】【了】【读】【书】【,】【真】【不】【想】【让】【我】【回】【去】【,】【上】【海】【就】【是】【楼】【高】【车】【多】【人】【挤】【,】【连】【喝】【的】【水】【都】【有】【一】【股】【漂】【白】【粉】【的】【气】【味】【,】【哪】【里】【比】【得】【上】【山】【清】【水】【秀】【的】【东】【山】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【缓】【步】【朝】【山】【坞】【深】【处】【走】【去】【,】【只】【见】【茶】【丛】【更】【加】【茂】【密】【,】【一】【排】【排】【既】【青】【翠】【又】【整】【齐】【。】【在】【茶】【山】【漫】【步】【,】【说】【笑】【谈】【吐】【当】【然】【离】【不】【开】【茶】【字】【。】【伯】【父】【兴】【致】【很】【高】【地】【说】【:】【“】【碧】【螺】【春】【自】【唐】【代】【被】【人】【工】【栽】【培】【利】【用】【起】【来】【,】【在】【洞】【庭】【山】【悠】【然】【一】【千】【多】【年】【岁】【月】【,】【茶】【已】【几】【乎】【渗】【透】【到】【人】【们】【生】【活】【的】【每】【一】【个】【角】【落】【。】【”】【他】【停】【了】【一】【下】【又】【津】【津】【乐】【道】【地】【讲】【了】【起】【来】【:】【清】【晨】【,】【上】【了】【年】【纪】【的】【老】【汉】【早】【早】【起】【床】【,】【赶】【到】【茶】【楼】【喝】【一】【个】【小】【时】【的】【茶】【,】【这】【叫】【早】【茶】【;】【午】【饭】【后】【,】【年】【轻】【人】【到】【茶】【馆】【泡】【一】【壶】【新】【茶】【,】【边】【喝】【边】【聊】【,】【又】【称】【午】【茶】【;】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【,】【亲】【朋】【好】【友】【聚】【在】【一】【起】【,】【边】【饮】【边】【聊】【,】【名】【曰】【夜】【茶】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【早】【茶】【宜】【浓】【,】【可】【润】【喉】【清】【目】【;】【午】【茶】【需】【热】【,】【利】【尿】【爽】【身】【;】【夜】【茶】【要】【淡】【,】【宜】【于】【入】【眠】【。】【伯】【父】【真】【不】【愧】【是】【位】【研】【究】【茶】【俗】【的】【行】【家】【,】【他】【还】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【在】【茶】【乡】【,】【客】【人】【饭】【后】【端】【上】【一】【杯】【热】【茶】【,】【称】【礼】【茶】【;】【造】【房】【时】【正】【梁】【上】【挂】【袋】【茶】【叶】【,】【名】【发】【茶】【;】【老】【人】【做】【寿】【,】【晚】【辈】【送】【斤】【新】【茶】【,】【曰】【寿】【茶】【;】【孩】【童】【入】【学】【时】【喝】【杯】【清】【茶】【,】【为】【状】【元】【茶】【;】【新】【娘】【入】【新】【房】【吃】【杯】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【和】【桂】【圆】【、】【冰】【糖】【莲】【心】【汤】【,】【叫】【茶】【点】【,】【又】【称】【新】【人】【茶】【;】【谁】【家】【遇】【到】【了】【不】【吉】【利】【的】【事】【,】【讨】【上】【七】【家】【邻】【居】【的】【茶】【叶】【喝】【,】【能】【逢】【凶】【化】【吉】【,】【平】【安】【无】【事】【,】【为】【神】【茶】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【伯】【母】【则】【说】【,】【最】【值】【得】【一】【提】【的】【还】【是】【月】【明】【茶】【,】【这】【也】【是】【家】【乡】【的】【习】【俗】【。】【中】【秋】【之】【夜】【,】【明】【月】【初】【升】【,】【在】【院】【中】【摆】【上】【一】【张】【八】【仙】【桌】【,】【桌】【上】【放】【着】【月】【饼】【及】【果】【品】【,】【一】【束】【金】【桂】【插】【于】【瓶】【中】【,】【全】【家】【人】【团】【团】【围】【坐】【,】【取】【一】【套】【青】【花】【陶】【瓷】【茶】【具】【,】【然】【后】【分】【别】【放】【入】【一】【小】【撮】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【。】【茶】【叶】【如】【青】【螺】【入】【水】【,】【旋】【转】【着】【飞】【速】【下】【沉】【。】【这】【时】【叶】【芽】【伸】【展】【,】【茸】【毛】【轻】【舒】【,】【一】【旗】【一】【枪】【,】【嫩】【绿】【透】【亮】【,】【姿】【态】【极】【其】【动】【人】【。】【整】【个】【白】【瓷】【杯】【中】【,】【汤】【色】【碧】【绿】【清】【澈】【,】【清】【香】【扑】【鼻】【而】【来】【。】【边】【吃】【月】【饼】【边】【品】【茶】【,】【边】【赏】【明】【月】【便】【话】【家】【常】【,】【口】【中】【甜】【津】【津】【,】【心】【里】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【。】【人】【们】【说】【,】【年】【夜】【饭】【吃】【的】【是】【热】【闹】【,】【月】【明】【茶】【喝】【的】【是】【清】【雅】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【和】【伯】【父】【母】【边】【走】【边】【聊】【,】【不】【觉】【来】【到】【山】【顶】【,】【放】【眼】【浩】【渺】【的】【太】【湖】【,】【碧】【波】【粼】【粼】【,】【帆】【影】【点】【点】【,】【真】【心】【旷】【神】【怡】【也】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【茶】【在】【故】【乡】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【中】【占】【据】【这】【样】【重】【要】【的】【位】【置】【,】【真】【出】【乎】【我】【意】【料】【。】【我】【深】【深】【感】【到】【,】【碧】【螺】【春】【是】【故】【乡】【的】【招】【牌】【,】【而】【故】【乡】【的】【茶】【俗】【,】【确】【是】【一】【种】【源】【远】【流】【长】【的】【江】【南】【文】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【不】【仅】【茶】【香】【山】【水】【美】【,】【而】【且】【民】【风】【淳】【朴】【、】【空】【气】【清】【新】【,】【在】【那】【里】【调】【养】【了】【几】【个】【月】【,】【身】【体】【明】【显】【有】【所】【好】【转】【。】【在】【离】【开】【老】【屋】【和】【亲】【人】【告】【别】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【竟】【落】【下】【泪】【来】【,】【心】【里】【更】【爱】【自】【己】【的】【故】【乡】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【丽】【宝】【同】【学】【的】【故】【乡】【洞】【庭】【东】【山】【,】【既】【以】【风】【景】【名】【胜】【著】【称】【,】【又】【是】【物】【阜】【民】【丰】【之】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【从】【家】【乡】【养】【病】【回】【来】【之】【后】【,】【写】【了】【篇】【盛】【赞】【故】【乡】【的】【作】【文】【,】【起】【初】【写】【得】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【把】【故】【乡】【值】【得】【一】【夸】【的】【东】【西】【都】【搬】【出】【来】【说】【了】【一】【番】【。】【我】【问】【她】【,】【你】【的】【家】【乡】【出】【产】【哪】【些】【好】【东】【西】【,】【她】【说】【有】【枇】【杷】【、】【红】【橘】【、】【碧】【螺】【春】【这】【三】【宝】【,】【我】【又】【问】【,】【其】【中】【最】【有】【名】【的】【又】【是】【什】【么】【?】【她】【说】【是】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【。】【我】【说】【好】【,】【你】【就】【写】【写】【它】【吧】【,】【东】【山】【既】【是】【茶】【乡】【,】【定】【会】【有】【许】【多】【关】【于】【茶】【的】【风】【俗】【,】【你】【可】【连】【带】【着】【写】【,】【让】【我】【们】【对】【你】【的】【故】【乡】【有】【更】【多】【的】【了】【解】【。】【于】【是】【就】【有】【了】【这】【篇】【《】【故】【乡】【茶】【俗】【》】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【是】【写】【作】【之】【大】【忌】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【学】【生】【作】【文】【,】【在】【不】【长】【的】【篇】【幅】【里】【想】【把】【什】【么】【都】【写】【清】【楚】【,】【很】【可】【能】【是】【吃】【力】【不】【讨】【好】【。】【唐】【丽】【宝】【同】【学】【舍】【弃】【了】【她】【喜】【欢】【的】【许】【多】【东】【西】【,】【单】【独】【写】【碧】【螺】【春】【,】【写】【茶】【俗】【,】【不】【仅】【减】【轻】【了】【文】【章】【的】【负】【载】【,】【内】【容】【也】【更】【见】【深】【度】【了】【。】【兵】【法】【上】【说】【,】【伤】【其】【十】【指】【不】【如】【断】【其】【一】【指】【。】【这】【也】【同】【样】【适】【用】【于】【写】【作】【,】【选】【材】【上】【切】【忌】【贪】【多】【求】【全】【,】【而】【要】【突】【出】【一】【点】【,】【以】【求】【深】【入】【。】【如】【若】【追】【求】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【结】【果】【很】【可】【能】【“】【面】【面】【俱】【不】【到】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【丽】【宝】【此】【文】【,】【洋】【溢】【着】【一】【种】【浓】【郁】【的】【人】【文】【气】【息】【。】【这】【是】【我】【最】【欣】【赏】【的】【,】【也】【是】【最】【值】【得】【我】【们】【加】【以】【借】【鉴】【的】【。】【纵】【观】【青】【少】【年】【学】【生】【的】【文】【章】【,】【有】【的】【洋】【溢】【着】【青】【春】【气】【息】【,】【有】【的】【充】【满】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【有】【的】【具】【有】【鲜】【明】【的】【时】【代】【气】【息】【,】【但】【富】【有】【人】【文】【气】【息】【的】【却】【不】【多】【,】【而】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【却】【做】【到】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【,】【文】【章】【中】【有】【较】【强】【的】【知】【识】【性】【。】【你】【看】【,】【碧】【螺】【春】【茶】【有】【着】【独】【特】【的】【喝】【法】【,】【它】【还】【能】【用】【来】【入】【菜】【,】【烹】【制】【出】【一】【道】【江】【南】【名】【菜】【,】【当】【地】【茶】【农】【用】【沸】【水】【冲】【泡】【新】【鲜】【的】【嫩】【叶】【就】【成】【了】【清】【香】【提】【神】【的】【“】【神】【仙】【茶】【”】【。】【它】【的】【培】【植】【已】【有】【千】【年】【历】【史】【,】【而】【且】【已】【融】【入】【民】【众】【日】【常】【生】【活】【的】【方】【方】【面】【面】【,】【这】【些】【对】【读】【者】【来】【说】【,】【都】【很】【有】【新】【鲜】【感】【。】【如】【果】【没】【有】【掌】【握】【有】【关】【碧】【螺】【春】【丰】【富】【的】【知】【识】【,】【那】【肯】【定】【是】【写】【不】【出】【来】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【渗】【透】【一】【些】【知】【识】【,】【不】【仅】【有】【必】【要】【,】【还】【可】【使】【文】【章】【增】【添】【人】【文】【色】【彩】【。】【记】【得】【有】【位】【同】【学】【写】【了】【篇】【绍】【兴】【沈】【园】【的】【游】【记】【,】【居】【然】【对】【陆】【游】【的】【《】【钗】【头】【凤】【》】【以】【及】【他】【和】【唐】【琬】【凄】【婉】【的】【爱】【情】【只】【字】【未】【提】【,】【把】【沈】【园】【当】【成】【了】【一】【般】【的】【园】【林】【,】【那】【就】【忽】【视】【了】【它】【的】【历】【史】【特】【色】【。】【而】【有】【位】【同】【学】【写】【了】【篇】【《】【梅】【园】【观】【梅】【》】【,】【由】【于】【去】【游】【玩】【之】【前】【,】【做】【了】【点】【功】【课】【,】【从】【网】【上】【查】【了】【一】【些】【梅】【的】【资】【料】【,】【最】【后】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【地】【用】【进】【了】【作】【文】【中】【,】【为】【作】【文】【增】【色】【不】【少】【。】【人】【文】【知】【识】【的】【匮】【乏】【,】【正】【是】【现】【在】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【作】【文】【读】【来】【乏】【味】【的】【原】【因】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【次】【,】【文】【章】【中】【还】【洋】【溢】【着】【一】【种】【浓】【郁】【的】【情】【怀】【。】【热】【爱】【故】【乡】【是】【人】【类】【的】【一】【种】【普】【遍】【的】【情】【感】【,】【这】【种】【情】【感】【的】【内】【核】【实】【际】【上】【是】【爱】【国】【主】【义】【。】【唐】【丽】【宝】【同】【学】【说】【起】【自】【己】【的】【故】【乡】【简】【直】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【她】【把】【对】【故】【乡】【的】【爱】【,】【这】【种】【深】【厚】【的】【情】【感】【融】【进】【了】【叙】【事】【状】【物】【之】【中】【,】【如】【写】【翠】【峰】【坞】【,】【就】【介】【绍】【了】【众】【多】【历】【史】【名】【人】【在】【此】【留】【下】【过】【他】【们】【的】【足】【迹】【和】【诗】【篇】【,】【自】【然】【美】【与】【人】【文】【美】【便】【交】【相】【辉】【映】【。】【当】【村】【姑】【背】【诵】【唐】【伯】【虎】【《】【翠】【峰】【游】【》】【的】【诗】【后】【,】【她】【自】【己】【也】【即】【兴】【来】【了】【两】【句】【,】【诗】【虽】【是】【打】【油】【诗】【,】【却】【是】【真】【情】【的】【流】【露】【。】【在】【故】【乡】【小】【住】【之】【后】【,】【临】【别】【竟】【至】【流】【泪】【。】【她】【对】【故】【乡】【的】【热】【爱】【,】【对】【江】【南】【文】【化】【的】【热】【爱】【,】【引】【得】【我】【们】【好】【生】【羡】【慕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【使】【文】【章】【富】【有】【人】【文】【气】【息】【的】【,】【还】【有】【语】【言】【因】【素】【。】【唐】【丽】【宝】【同】【学】【能】【够】【熟】【练】【地】【运】【用】【优】【美】【的】【书】【面】【语】【言】【来】【进】【行】【写】【作】【,】【正】【是】【她】【的】【一】【大】【优】【势】【。】【文】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【伯】【父】【做】【碧】【螺】【虾】【仁】【,】【还】【是】【村】【姑】【煮】【神】【仙】【茶】【,】【都】【写】【得】【活】【灵】【活】【现】【,】【无】【论】【是】【对】【家】【乡】【茶】【俗】【的】【介】【绍】【,】【还】【是】【文】【章】【的】【结】【尾】【,】【都】【写】【得】【简】【洁】【而】【有】【概】【括】【力】【。】【语】【言】【本】【身】【就】【是】【人】【的】【精】【神】【和】【修】【养】【,】【只】【有】【具】【有】【了】【长】【期】【的】【阅】【读】【经】【历】【,】【形】【成】【了】【一】【定】【的】【文】【化】【积】【淀】【,】【才】【能】【使】【语】【言】【有】【一】【种】【书】【卷】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【、】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】谈莉娜【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【砰】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【,】【吃】【完】【饭】【,】【妈】【妈】【怒】【气】【冲】【冲】【地】【把】【手】【中】【的】【碗】【一】【摔】【,】【爸】【爸】【叹】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【放】【下】【手】【中】【的】【碗】【,】【而】【我】【却】【把】【头】【低】【着】【,】【像】【一】【只】【受】【惊】【的】【小】【兔】【子】【,】【不】【敢】【直】【视】【他】【们】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【科】【学】【不】【断】【进】【步】【,】【技】【术】【不】【断】【更】【新】【。】【人】【们】【充】【满】【了】【对】【未】【来】【的】【向】【往】【和】【憧】【憬】【,】【相】【信】【未】【来】【会】【更】【加】【美】【好】【。】【许】【多】【的】【科】【学】【家】【正】【在】【努】【力】【想】【让】【这】【空】【气】【变】【得】【更】【清】【新】【,】【天】【空】【变】【得】【更】【蓝】【,】【水】【变】【得】【更】【清】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【,】【我】【相】【信】【,】【不】【久】【的】【将】【来】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【存】【环】【境】【会】【得】【到】【改】【善】【。】【我】【认】【为】【对】【大】【气】【污】【染】【很】【严】【重】【的】【有】【车】【、】【工】【厂】【等】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【陷】【于】【对】【车】【的】【遐】【思】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【0】【年】【后】【,】【科】【学】【家】【会】【研】【制】【出】【一】【种】【叫】【“】【变】【形】【金】【刚】【”】【的】【车】【。】【之】【所】【以】【称】【这】【种】【车】【为】【“】【变】【形】【金】【刚】【”】【,】【是】【因】【为】【它】【可】【以】【变】【换】【出】【几】【种】【不】【同】【类】【型】【的】【车】【。】【比】【如】【你】【要】【载】【一】【些】【重】【货】【,】【它】【就】【可】【以】【变】【成】【货】【车】【;】【如】【果】【你】【有】【急】【事】【,】【它】【就】【可】【以】【变】【成】【小】【轿】【车】【。】【这】【可】【是】【名】【副】【其】【实】【的】【“】【变】【形】【金】【刚】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【种】【车】【辆】【的】【颜】【色】【也】【有】【很】【多】【,】【而】【且】【都】【很】【漂】【亮】【。】【你】【喜】【欢】【哪】【个】【颜】【色】【就】【挑】【哪】【个】【颜】【色】【,】【然】【后】【用】【手】【摁】【下】【那】【个】【按】【钮】【,】【车】【子】【便】【可】【以】【自】【动】【换】【色】【。】【你】【想】【,】【这】【样】【漂】【亮】【的】【车】【子】【是】【多】【么】【吸】【引】【人】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【者】【,】【这】【种】【车】【无】【污】【染】【,】【很】【环】【保】【。】【原】【来】【,】【它】【是】【科】【学】【家】【们】【设】【计】【的】【以】【空】【气】【为】【动】【力】【的】【车】【子】【。】【它】【完】【全】【不】【需】【要】【油】【来】【启】【动】【,】【这】【样】【可】【以】【减】【少】【很】【多】【污】【染】【。】【另】【外】【,】【它】【还】【可】【以】【吸】【收】【太】【阳】【能】【和】【雨】【水】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【车】【最】【引】【人】【注】【目】【的】【是】【它】【的】【实】【用】【性】【。】【每】【当】【有】【人】【敲】【击】【车】【窗】【,】【并】【说】【出】【正】【确】【的】【密】【码】【,】【经】【它】【检】【验】【后】【,】【不】【超】【过】【2】【0】【秒】【的】【时】【间】【,】【它】【就】【会】【打】【开】【车】【门】【,】【欢】【迎】【你】【进】【去】【。】【当】【你】【感】【到】【口】【渴】【时】【,】【按】【下】【相】【应】【的】【按】【钮】【,】【就】【会】【有】【一】【杯】【清】【凉】【可】【口】【的】【水】【送】【到】【你】【面】【前】【。】【当】【你】【感】【到】【疲】【倦】【时】【,】【用】【手】【按】【下】【椅】【子】【上】【方】【的】【按】【钮】【,】【便】【会】【有】【一】【双】【机】【械】【手】【替】【你】【按】【摩】【,】【让】【你】【感】【到】【轻】【松】【、】【舒】【适】【和】【惬】【意】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【种】【车】【的】【优】【点】【数】【不】【胜】【数】【!】【不】【过】【,】【这】【只】【是】【我】【暂】【时】【的】【愿】【望】【,】【我】【希】【望】【通】【过】【我】【们】【每】【个】【人】【的】【努】【力】【早】【日】【实】【现】【这】【个】【愿】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【充】【满】【奇】【思】【妙】【想】【。】【大】【胆】【的】【想】【象】【,】【是】【本】【文】【一】【大】【亮】【点】【,】【同】【时】【,】【文】【章】【语】【言】【生】【动】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【作】【者】【的】【美】【好】【愿】【望】【,】【我】【想】【还】【有】【许】【多】【人】【都】【有】【着】【一】【样】【的】【美】【好】【希】【冀】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【金】【星】【闪】【)】谈莉娜【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【题】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【一】【:】【今】【天】【,】【新】【的】【奇】【迹】【出】【现】【在】【生】【命】【里】【;】【今】【天】【,】【智】【慧】【之】【声】【响】【彻】【校】【园】【;】【今】【天】【,】【爱】【在】【无】【偿】【地】【传】【递】【;】【今】【天】【,】【有】【人】【终】【于】【找】【到】【了】【自】【己】【的】【信】【仰】【;】【今】【天】【,】【这】【世】【界】【因】【为】【我】【们】【的】【笑】【容】【被】【装】【点】【得】【更】【美】【丽】【…】【…】【今】【天】【 】【,】【不】【是】【昨】【天】【一】【成】【不】【变】【的】【延】【续】【,】【而】【是】【明】【天】【追】【逐】【梦】【想】【的】【开】【始】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【今】【天】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【”】【为】【话】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【二】【:】【请】【以】【“】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【地】【图】【”】【或】【“】【地】【图】【_】【_】【_】【_】【_】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【要】【求】【:】【①】【 】【上】【面】【两】【题】【,】【任】【选】【一】【题】【,】【根】【据】【提】【示】【,】【扣】【题】【作】【文】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【 】【文】【体】【自】【选】【(】【诗】【歌】【除】【外】【)】【,】【不】【少】【于】【5】【0】【0】【字】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【 】【正】【文】【中】【如】【需】【出】【现】【本】【市】【人】【名】【、】【地】【名】【、】【校】【名】【,】【请】【用】【×】【×】【代】【替】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【解】【读】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【一】【是】【以】【时】【间】【为】【起】【点】【的】【话】【题】【作】【文】【。】【这】【个】【文】【题】【以】【一】【个】【主】【谓】【句】【来】【作】【为】【话】【题】【,】【而】【且】【这】【个】【主】【谓】【句】【是】【个】【疑】【问】【句】【,】【你】【对】【这】【个】【句】【子】【的】【回】【答】【就】【是】【文】【章】【写】【作】【的】【思】【路】【。】【所】【谓】【“】【今】【天】【”】【,】【可】【理】【解】【为】【眼】【前】【、】【正】【在】【发】【生】【的】【时】【间】【;】【也】【可】【以】【理】【解】【为】【当】【前】【、】【现】【在】【,】【最】【近】【的】【这】【段】【时】【间】【;】【立】【足】【当】【下】【,】【反】【思】【昨】【天】【,】【展】【望】【明】【天】【,】【是】【“】【今】【天】【”】【的】【主】【要】【内】【涵】【。】【“】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【”】【指】【的】【就】【是】【在】【一】【个】【特】【定】【时】【间】【内】【发】【生】【的】【事】【件】【,】【是】【文】【章】【要】【重】【点】【展】【现】【的】【部】【分】【。】【生】【活】【中】【有】【无】【数】【个】【“】【今】【天】【”】【悄】【然】【变】【成】【了】【昨】【天】【,】【把】【这】【些】【发】【生】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【记】【录】【下】【来】【,】【加】【以】【提】【炼】【,】【就】【是】【写】【作】【的】【素】【材】【。】【对】【于】【发】【生】【的】【事】【件】【,】【要】【写】【得】【具】【体】【、】【生】【动】【、】【清】【楚】【,】【并】【努】【力】【对】【事】【件】【进】【行】【升】【华】【、】【挖】【掘】【其】【内】【涵】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【题】【二】【则】【是】【从】【空】【间】【上】【做】【文】【章】【的】【半】【命】【题】【作】【文】【。】【“】【地】【图】【”】【,】【按】【词】【典】【解】【释】【是】【“】【说】【明】【地】【球】【表】【面】【的】【事】【物】【和】【现】【象】【分】【布】【情】【况】【的】【图】【”】【,】【但】【其】【实】【它】【代】【表】【的】【是】【一】【种】【永】【不】【止】【息】【的】【探】【索】【、】【创】【造】【和】【包】【容】【的】【人】【文】【精】【神】【,】【构】【思】【时】【要】【善】【于】【从】【“】【地】【图】【”】【上】【挖】【掘】【出】【写】【作】【的】【关】【键】【词】【,】【如】【好】【奇】【、】【未】【知】【与】【求】【知】【、】【梦】【想】【、】【志】【向】【、】【探】【索】【、】【脚】【步】【、】【追】【求】【、】【规】【划】【、】【方】【向】【、】【创】【造】【等】【。】【要】【根】【据】【自】【己】【对】【“】【地】【图】【”】【的】【理】【解】【来】【补】【充】【题】【目】【,】【如】【逝】【去】【的】【地】【图】【、】【青】【春】【的】【地】【图】【、】【友】【谊】【的】【地】【图】【、】【地】【图】【上】【的】【漫】【步】【、】【地】【图】【上】【的】【人】【生】【等】【,】【当】【然】【也】【可】【以】【把】【文】【题】【补】【充】【成】【一】【个】【句】【子】【,】【如】【我】【面】【对】【祖】【国】【的】【地】【图】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【融】【入】【生】【活】【、】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【是】【今】【年】【厦】【门】【作】【文】【题】【给】【我】【们】【的】【启】【示】【。】【“】【表】【达】【自】【己】【对】【自】【然】【、】【社】【会】【、】【人】【生】【的】【独】【特】【感】【受】【和】【真】【切】【体】【验】【”】【,】【“】【多】【角】【度】【地】【观】【察】【生】【活】【,】【发】【现】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【”】【已】【成】【为】【各】【地】【中】【考】【作】【文】【命】【题】【的】【共】【识】【,】【作】【文】【试】【题】【尽】【力】【贴】【近】【学】【生】【生】【活】【,】【让】【学】【生】【有】【话】【可】【说】【、】【有】【事】【可】【叙】【、】【有】【情】【可】【抒】【、】【有】【感】【可】【发】【是】【近】【年】【中】【考】【作】【文】【命】【题】【的】【共】【同】【特】【征】【。】【因】【此】【,】【在】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【融】【入】【生】【活】【、】【感】【悟】【生】【活】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【前】【提】【,】【也】【是】【获】【取】【独】【特】【感】【受】【和】【真】【切】【体】【验】【的】【唯】【一】【途】【径】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【一】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【下】【今】【天】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【厦】【门】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【生】【命】【中】【的】【目】【标】【和】【道】【路】【,】【不】【是】【受】【苦】【,】【也】【不】【是】【享】【乐】【,】【而】【是】【行】【动】【,】【在】【每】【个】【明】【天】【都】【要】【比】【今】【天】【更】【前】【进】【一】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【朗】【费】【罗】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【蜘】【蛛】【网】【无】【情】【地】【查】【封】【了】【你】【的】【灶】【台】【,】【灰】【烬】【的】【余】【烟】【叹】【息】【着】【悲】【哀】【,】【你】【是】【否】【痛】【恨】【如】【今】【;】【当】【阴】【冷】【的】【寒】【风】【扇】【动】【着】【微】【弱】【的】【羽】【翅】【,】【惨】【淡】【的】【夕】【阳】【徘】【徊】【在】【高】【原】【的】【脊】【梁】【,】【你】【是】【否】【相】【信】【明】【天】【。】【学】【会】【放】【下】【,】【不】【论】【今】【天】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【,】【是】【痛】【苦】【悲】【伤】【抑】【或】【是】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【,】【总】【有】【无】【数】【个】【明】【天】【等】【着】【我】【们】【去】【探】【寻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【乌】【台】【诗】【案】【,】【宦】【海】【浮】【沉】【,】【消】【沉】【抑】【郁】【的】【东】【坡】【居】【士】【来】【到】【了】【赤】【壁】【之】【上】【,】【望】【着】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【自】【问】【自】【答】【,】【终】【于】【悟】【出】【了】【“】【寄】【蜉】【蝣】【于】【天】【地】【,】【渺】【沧】【海】【之】【一】【粟】【”】【“】【自】【其】【不】【变】【者】【而】【观】【之】【,】【则】【物】【与】【我】【皆】【无】【尽】【也】【”】【。】【于】【是】【,】【苏】【子】【顿】【悟】【了】【,】【他】【放】【下】【了】【今】【天】【的】【显】【耀】【权】【势】【,】【摆】【脱】【官】【场】【,】【而】【追】【逐】【明】【日】【的】【悠】【闲】【自】【在】【,】【他】【将】【自】【己】【喻】【为】【野】【鹤】【,】【徜】【徉】【山】【水】【,】【寄】【情】【自】【然】【。】【无】【论】【今】【天】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【,】【对】【于】【他】【来】【讲】【不】【过】【是】【回】【眸】【自】【己】【人】【生】【之】【河】【中】【的】【一】【点】【小】【小】【的】【涟】【漪】【,】【是】【微】【不】【足】【道】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【之】【,】【如】【若】【执】【著】【于】【今】【天】【所】【发】【生】【的】【而】【放】【弃】【了】【明】【天】【,】【这】【终】【究】【会】【是】【一】【个】【悲】【剧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【西】【楚】【霸】【王】【项】【羽】【,】【在】【面】【对】【困】【境】【、】【四】【面】【楚】【歌】【之】【时】【,】【就】【是】【因】【为】【放】【不】【下】【今】【天】【的】【失】【败】【,】【而】【选】【择】【了】【自】【刎】【。】【如】【果】【他】【可】【以】【放】【下】【今】【天】【,】【放】【下】【一】【次】【的】【失】【败】【,】【那】【么】【也】【许】【美】【人】【不】【会】【自】【刎】【,】【乌】【江】【也】【不】【会】【只】【流】【淌】【着】【一】【曲】【悲】【歌】【;】【那】【么】【他】【一】【个】【顶】【天】【立】【地】【的】【大】【英】【雄】【或】【许】【可】【以】【在】【明】【日】【创】【造】【出】【一】【番】【惊】【天】【伟】【业】【。】【如】【同】【汪】【国】【真】【所】【说】【 】【:】【“】【太】【深】【的】【流】【连】【是】【一】【种】【羁】【绊】【,】【绊】【住】【的】【不】【只】【有】【双】【脚】【,】【还】【有】【未】【来】【。】【”】【如】【果】【他】【可】【以】【选】【择】【放】【下】【今】【天】【所】【发】【生】【的】【一】【切】【,】【那】【么】【历】【史】【或】【许】【就】【会】【被】【改】【写】【。】【放】【不】【下】【,】【终】【究】【不】【能】【走】【得】【更】【远】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【下】【“】【忠】【而】【被】【谤】【”】【的】【苦】【难】【,】【屈】【原】【用】【不】【屈】【谱】【写】【了】【明】【天】【“】【哀】【怨】【托】【离】【骚】【,】【孤】【忠】【报】【楚】【国】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【下】【当】【时】【宫】【刑】【之】【痛】【,】【司】【马】【迁】【吟】【唱】【出】【明】【天】【的】【“】【忧】【愁】【发】【愤】【,】【著】【成】【信】【史】【照】【生】【寰】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【没】【有】【执】【著】【于】【当】【时】【的】【失】【败】【,】【而】【是】【用】【热】【情】【与】【才】【智】【创】【造】【了】【明】【日】【的】【辉】【煌】【。】【不】【论】【今】【天】【发】【生】【了】【什】【么】【,】【它】【都】【将】【流】【逝】【,】【把】【握】【住】【眼】【前】【该】【做】【的】【,】【及】【早】【为】【明】【天】【做】【准】【备】【才】【是】【明】【智】【之】【举】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【富】【有】【战】【斗】【力】【的】【人】【生】【需】【要】【永】【无】【止】【境】【的】【追】【求】【,】【不】【要】【因】【今】【日】【的】【磨】【难】【而】【失】【去】【了】【明】【日】【锐】【意】【进】【取】【的】【棱】【角】【。】【走】【过】【去】【,】【即】【便】【风】【雨】【再】【大】【,】【也】【要】【因】【憧】【憬】【明】【天】【而】【笑】【对】【今】【天】【所】【发】【生】【的】【一】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【之】【美】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【三】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【分】【明】【。】【开】【篇】【以】【两】【句】【优】【美】【的】【情】【境】【再】【现】【并】【引】【发】【读】【者】【思】【考】【之】【后】【,】【简】【明】【扼】【要】【地】【亮】【出】【文】【章】【观】【点】【,】【中】【间】【以】【历】【史】【人】【物】【的】【事】【例】【来】【论】【证】【,】【结】【尾】【用】【警】【策】【有】【力】【的】【语】【句】【收】【束】【全】【文】【,】【文】【章】【条】【理】【清】【晰】【,】【结】【构】【严】【谨】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【论】【证】【强】【烈】【有】【力】【。】【东】【坡】【居】【士】【的】【例】【子】【是】【从】【正】【面】【论】【证】【,】【西】【楚】【霸】【王】【的】【例】【子】【是】【从】【反】【面】【论】【证】【,】【事】【例】【叙】【写】【中】【融】【入】【分】【析】【议】【论】【,】【紧】【接】【着】【简】【要】【列】【举】【屈】【原】【、】【司】【马】【迁】【事】【例】【,】【论】【证】【时】【正】【反】【结】【合】【,】【举】【例】【时】【有】【详】【有】【略】【,】【有】【力】【地】【强】【化】【了】【文】【章】【的】【论】【证】【力】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【知】【识】【积】【累】【丰】【厚】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【灵】【动】【犀】【利】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【那】【浑】【然】【天】【成】【的】【引】【用】【更】【是】【精】【彩】【。】【题】【记】【直】【接】【引】【用】【朗】【费】【罗】【的】【警】【句】【,】【为】【文】【章】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【;】【而】【在】【论】【证】【部】【分】【,】【每】【个】【例】【子】【中】【都】【有】【引】【用】【,】【信】【手】【拈】【来】【又】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【,】【这】【体】【现】【出】【的】【自】【然】【是】【作】【者】【的】【文】【学】【素】【养】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【考】【场】【佳】【作】【二】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【充】【满】【爱】【的】【地】【图】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【厦】【门】【一】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【的】【抽】【屉】【里】【,】【珍】【藏】【着】【一】【份】【自】【家】【画】【的】【简】【易】【地】【图】【,】【这】【份】【地】【图】【用】【不】【同】【颜】【色】【的】【笔】【画】【了】【许】【多】【圈】【圈】【点】【点】【。】【它】【虽】【然】【简】【易】【但】【充】【满】【着】【爱】【,】【请】【听】【我】【细】【细】【道】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【公】【年】【事】【已】【高】【,】【身】【体】【又】【不】【好】【,】【整】【天】【吃】【药】【。】【外】【婆】【活】【着】【时】【他】【们】【还】【可】【以】【互】【相】【照】【顾】【着】【,】【现】【在】【外】【婆】【因】【病】【去】【世】【,】【外】【公】【便】【要】【一】【个】【人】【守】【着】【那】【房】【子】【,】【可】【大】【家】【又】【怕】【他】【睹】【物】【伤】【情】【,】【于】【是】【决】【定】【把】【外】【公】【接】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【住】【哪】【儿】【?】【跟】【谁】【住】【?】【又】【成】【了】【一】【个】【大】【问】【题】【。】【大】【舅】【拿】【出】【纸】【笔】【,】【画】【了】【个】【简】【易】【的】【地】【图】【,】【把】【大】【家】【住】【的】【地】【方】【及】【周】【围】【环】【境】【画】【了】【上】【去】【,】【一】【起】【讨】【论】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【贯】【心】【急】【的】【大】【姨】【妈】【边】【把】【她】【家】【地】【址】【圈】【起】【来】【边】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【住】【我】【家】【吧】【,】【我】【家】【屋】【前】【有】【河】【,】【屋】【后】【有】【山】【,】【爸】【没】【事】【可】【以】【去】【钓】【钓】【鱼】【,】【到】【山】【上】【散】【散】【步】【,】【而】【且】【那】【里】【空】【气】【也】【清】【新】【,】【适】【合】【老】【人】【居】【住】【!】【”】【大】【姨】【妈】【话】【音】【刚】【落】【,】【大】【舅】【便】【拿】【起】【笔】【在】【地】【图】【上】【大】【姨】【妈】【家】【那】【儿】【打】【了】【个】【大】【叉】【:】【“】【你】【家】【有】【个】【孩】【子】【要】【高】【考】【了】【,】【爸】【住】【那】【儿】【肯】【定】【不】【方】【便】【,】【还】【是】【住】【我】【家】【吧】【,】【没】【孩】【子】【要】【高】【考】【,】【我】【最】【近】【也】【没】【什】【么】【事】【儿】【,】【还】【可】【以】【多】【陪】【陪】【爸】【呢】【!】【爸】【住】【我】【那】【儿】【最】【合】【适】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【不】【行】【,】【你】【那】【闲】【不】【住】【的】【性】【子】【,】【没】【陪】【爸】【几】【天】【肯】【定】【又】【要】【忙】【工】【作】【了】【,】【爸】【去】【了】【一】【样】【会】【感】【到】【寂】【寞】【的】【,】【住】【我】【家】【吧】【,】【离】【我】【家】【不】【远】【还】【有】【个】【公】【园】【,】【爸】【可】【以】【去】【那】【儿】【散】【心】【…】【…】【”】【妈】【妈】【边】【说】【着】【边】【在】【地】【图】【上】【大】【舅】【家】【那】【位】【置】【打】【了】【个】【叉】【。】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【还】【没】【有】【说】【完】【,】【一】【向】【沉】【稳】【的】【小】【舅】【便】【说】【话】【了】【:】【“】【你】【家】【也】【不】【行】【,】【你】【家】【住】【高】【楼】【,】【爸】【不】【一】【定】【适】【应】【,】【而】【且】【你】【还】【与】【公】【婆】【住】【在】【一】【起】【,】【也】【不】【方】【便】【!】【住】【我】【家】【吧】【,】【我】【家】【靠】【海】【,】【空】【气】【还】【清】【新】【,】【爸】【无】【聊】【的】【时】【候】【我】【可】【以】【陪】【他】【下】【下】【棋】【,】【散】【散】【步】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【讨】【论】【来】【讨】【论】【去】【,】【还】【是】【没】【有】【结】【果】【,】【大】【家】【都】【想】【让】【外】【公】【住】【自】【己】【的】【家】【,】【再】【看】【那】【张】【地】【图】【上】【,】【满】【是】【五】【颜】【六】【色】【的】【大】【叉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【大】【家】【决】【定】【抓】【阄】【,】【抓】【到】【谁】【的】【名】【字】【外】【公】【便】【住】【谁】【家】【。】【负】【责】【抓】【阄】【的】【人】【是】【我】【,】【由】【于】【我】【想】【让】【外】【公】【住】【我】【家】【,】【我】【便】【在】【妈】【妈】【的】【名】【字】【上】【折】【了】【个】【小】【角】【,】【不】【料】【被】【眼】【尖】【的】【小】【舅】【看】【到】【了】【,】【小】【舅】【把】【纸】【条】【拿】【回】【去】【抹】【平】【,】【放】【好】【。】【我】【又】【重】【新】【抓】【了】【一】【次】【,】【还】【是】【妈】【妈】【的】【名】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【我】【在】【地】【图】【上】【我】【家】【的】【位】【置】【打】【了】【一】【个】【鲜】【红】【的】【大】【钩】【。】【我】【和】【妈】【妈】【笑】【得】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【,】【小】【舅】【目】【瞪】【口】【呆】【地】【看】【着】【我】【,】【大】【舅】【也】【摘】【下】【眼】【镜】【无】【奈】【地】【看】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【的】【花】【儿】【随】【风】【飘】【动】【,】【仿】【佛】【在】【弹】【奏】【一】【曲】【和】【谐】【的】【家】【庭】【协】【奏】【曲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【外】【公】【搬】【来】【后】【,】【我】【将】【这】【张】【地】【图】【拿】【给】【他】【看】【,】【并】【讲】【述】【了】【整】【件】【事】【。】【外】【公】【颤】【抖】【着】【手】【拿】【起】【这】【张】【地】【图】【说】【:】【“】【这】【不】【只】【是】【一】【张】【普】【通】【的】【地】【图】【,】【而】【是】【充】【满】【爱】【的】【地】【图】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【啊】【,】【这】【张】【地】【图】【上】【充】【满】【了】【妈】【妈】【他】【们】【对】【外】【公】【的】【爱】【。】【这】【张】【充】【满】【爱】【的】【地】【图】【我】【将】【永】【远】【珍】【藏】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【有】【三】【大】【亮】【点】【值】【得】【我】【们】【品】【味】【与】【借】【鉴】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【精】【巧】【构】【思】【动】【人】【心】【。】【本】【是】【抽】【象】【冰】【冷】【的】【地】【图】【,】【在】【作】【者】【笔】【下】【却】【变】【成】【一】【幅】【充】【满】【爱】【的】【温】【馨】【的】【地】【图】【,】【用】【爱】【心】【绘】【制】【地】【图】【,】【用】【地】【图】【凝】【聚】【亲】【情】【,】【这】【样】【的】【构】【思】【自】【是】【精】【巧】【且】【动】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【人】【物】【刻】【画】【形】【象】【美】【。】【文】【中】【人】【物】【形】【象】【主】【要】【通】【过】【语】【言】【描】【写】【来】【刻】【画】【,】【人】【物】【语】【言】【不】【多】【,】【但】【都】【能】【以】【替】【外】【公】【着】【想】【为】【中】【心】【,】【寥】【寥】【几】【句】【中】【既】【抓】【住】【对】【方】【主】【要】【弱】【处】【又】【极】【力】【陈】【述】【自】【己】【长】【处】【,】【再】【辅】【以】【一】【些】【动】【作】【、】【神】【态】【描】【写】【,】【人】【物】【形】【象】【刻】【画】【得】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【,】【跃】【然】【纸】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【主】【旨】【深】【刻】【韵】【味】【长】【。】【这】【张】【地】【图】【,】【展】【现】【出】【的】【是】【一】【家】【子】【对】【长】【者】【孝】【的】【主】【旨】【。】【一】【个】【让】【大】【家】【都】【操】【心】【的】【养】【老】【问】【题】【,】【在】【考】【生】【的】【笔】【下】【却】【充】【满】【家】【的】【温】【馨】【。】【这】【样】【的】【主】【旨】【,】【既】【体】【现】【了】【中】【华】【美】【德】【的】【传】【承】【,】【又】【切】【中】【当】【前】【社】【会】【养】【老】【的】【焦】【点】【问】【题】【,】【小】【文】【章】【中】【蕴】【涵】【着】【大】【背】【景】【,】【显】【然】【就】【比】【一】【般】【的】【亲】【情】【题】【材】【立】【意】【高】【出】【一】【筹】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【鸟】【宿】【池】【边】【树】【,】【僧】【敲】【月】【下】【门】【。】【”】【唐】【代】【文】【学】【家】【韩】【愈】【认】【为】【用】【“】【敲】【”】【好】【,】【我】【却】【认】【为】【用】【“】【推】【”】【好】【,】【因】【为】【一】【个】【“】【推】【”】【字】【,】【体】【现】【了】【推】【门】【人】【自】【信】【的】【心】【态】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【信】【是】【一】【个】【人】【不】【可】【缺】【失】【的】【心】【理】【素】【质】【。】【它】【像】【一】【把】【金】【钥】【匙】【,】【为】【你】【打】【开】【成】【功】【的】【大】【门】【;】【它】【似】【一】【盏】【明】【灯】【,】【引】【领】【你】【迈】【进】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【;】【它】【像】【一】【艘】【航】【船】【,】【载】【着】【你】【驶】【向】【胜】【利】【的】【彼】【岸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【信】【,】【说】【起】【来】【容】【易】【,】【做】【起】【来】【难】【。】【本】【学】【期】【初】【,】【校】【学】【生】【会】【竞】【选】【主】【席】【,】【每】【班】【派】【一】【名】【代】【表】【参】【加】【竞】【选】【。】【老】【师】【将】【信】【赖】【的】【目】【光】【落】【到】【我】【的】【身】【上】【,】【但】【我】【面】【对】【这】【一】【重】【任】【时】【却】【有】【些】【畏】【惧】【。】【尽】【管】【如】【此】【,】【我】【还】【是】【决】【定】【迎】【难】【而】【上】【,】【写】【好】【演】【讲】【稿】【后】【,】【我】【就】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【地】【读】【起】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【竞】【选】【终】【于】【开】【始】【了】【,】【看】【着】【其】【他】【选】【手】【落】【落】【大】【方】【的】【仪】【表】【,】【演】【讲】【时】【口】【齿】【清】【晰】【、】【雄】【辩】【滔】【滔】【,】【台】【下】【掌】【声】【不】【断】【。】【我】【却】【顾】【虑】【重】【重】【,】【焦】【急】【万】【分】【。】【终】【于】【到】【我】【登】【台】【了】【,】【我】【站】【在】【台】【上】【手】【脚】【发】【软】【,】【双】【腿】【颤】【抖】【,】【真】【想】【临】【阵】【脱】【逃】【,】【但】【是】【为】【了】【不】【辜】【负】【老】【师】【和】【同】【学】【们】【的】【期】【望】【,】【我】【鼓】【足】【勇】【气】【,】【吞】【吞】【吐】【吐】【地】【念】【完】【讲】【稿】【。】【结】【果】【我】【与】【主】【席】【之】【位】【失】【之】【交】【臂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【演】【讲】【结】【束】【后】【,】【我】【疾】【步】【向】【教】【室】【走】【去】【,】【泪】【水】【洒】【了】【一】【路】【。】【正】【在】【这】【时】【,】【我】【突】【然】【发】【现】【校】【园】【花】【圃】【中】【的】【秋】【菊】【在】【秋】【风】【中】【昂】【首】【怒】【放】【了】【。】【此】【情】【此】【景】【,】【让】【我】【想】【起】【泰】【戈】【尔】【那】【句】【话】【:】【“】【虽】【然】【天】【空】【没】【有】【留】【下】【我】【的】【痕】【迹】【,】【但】【是】【我】【已】【经】【飞】【过】【。】【”】【尽】【管】【这】【次】【竞】【选】【我】【名】【落】【孙】【山】【,】【但】【是】【我】【已】【经】【试】【过】【了】【,】【尽】【力】【了】【。】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【自】【信】【像】【温】【泉】【中】【的】【热】【气】【一】【样】【,】【在】【我】【身】【上】【的】【每】【个】【角】【落】【散】【发】【、】【蒸】【腾】【、】【弥】【漫】【开】【来】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【演】【讲】【竞】【赛】【让】【我】【轻】【轻】【推】【开】【自】【信】【那】【扇】【门】【,】【让】【我】【决】【心】【改】【掉】【自】【卑】【的】【坏】【毛】【病】【。】【我】【以】【前】【从】【不】【主】【动】【与】【同】【学】【交】【流】【,】【因】【为】【怕】【他】【们】【不】【喜】【欢】【我】【,】【如】【今】【我】【开】【始】【真】【诚】【地】【与】【同】【学】【们】【沟】【通】【。】【班】【级】【大】【扫】【除】【时】【,】【我】【总】【是】【冲】【在】【最】【前】【面】【;】【同】【学】【一】【不】【小】【心】【打】【翻】【饭】【盒】【,】【我】【立】【即】【把】【自】【己】【的】【盒】【饭】【分】【一】【半】【给】【他】【;】【如】【果】【哪】【位】【同】【学】【摔】【伤】【,】【我】【会】【主】【动】【扶】【他】【去】【卫】【生】【室】【…】【…】【感】【人】【心】【者】【,】【莫】【先】【乎】【心】【,】【莫】【先】【乎】【情】【。】【现】【在】【,】【我】【内】【心】【充】【满】【无】【限】【的】【自】【信】【,】【相】【信】【我】【会】【做】【一】【名】【好】【干】【部】【,】【更】【会】【做】【每】【个】【人】【的】【好】【朋】【友】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【用】【真】【诚】【推】【开】【了】【与】【同】【学】【之】【间】【的】【那】【扇】【心】【门】【,】【他】【们】【终】【于】【理】【解】【我】【,】【并】【给】【予】【我】【支】【持】【和】【帮】【助】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【自】【信】【是】【一】【扇】【神】【奇】【的】【大】【门】【,】【只】【要】【你】【推】【开】【它】【,】【你】【就】【会】【满】【载】【而】【归】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【将】【自】【信】【比】【喻】【为】【一】【扇】【门】【,】【既】【形】【象】【又】【别】【出】【心】【裁】【。】【竞】【选】【校】【学】【生】【会】【主】【席】【的】【演】【讲】【比】【赛】【名】【落】【孙】【山】【,】【我】【悻】【悻】【而】【归】【,】【然】【睹】【物】【缘】【情】【,】【泰】【戈】【尔】【的】【名】【言】【使】【我】【扬】【起】【自】【信】【的】【风】【帆】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【关】【注】【生】【活】【中】【的】【每】【个】【细】【节】【,】【用】【真】【诚】【轻】【轻】【推】【开】【了】【与】【同】【学】【之】【间】【沟】【通】【的】【那】【扇】【门】【。】【全】【文】【主】【旨】【鲜】【明】【,】【文】【理】【顺】【畅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【海】【 】【 】【子】【)】谈莉娜【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【这】【个】【成】【语】【,】【你】【知】【道】【是】【什】【么】【原】【因】【吗】【?】【这】【得】【从】【历】【史】【渊】【源】【说】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【远】【古】【时】【期】【,】【我】【们】【夜】【郎】【人】【的】【祖】【先】【过】【着】【日】【出】【而】【耕】【、】【日】【落】【而】【息】【的】【生】【活】【,】【男】【耕】【女】【织】【、】【结】【婚】【生】【子】【是】【他】【们】【人】【生】【的】【最】【大】【追】【求】【。】【辈】【辈】【代】【代】【繁】【衍】【下】【去】【,】【产】【生】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【夜】【郎】【文】【化】【,】【这】【是】【夜】【郎】【人】【的】【自】【豪】【与】【骄】【傲】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【有】【了】【“】【夜】【郎】【自】【大】【,】【不】【知】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【之】【说】【,】【这】【反】【倒】【激】【发】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【辈】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【和】【自】【信】【心】【,】【他】【们】【对】【天】【外】【的】【天】【产】【生】【了】【好】【奇】【心】【。】【渴】【望】【着】【走】【出】【山】【去】【,】【看】【看】【天】【外】【的】【天】【到】【底】【是】【什】【么】【样】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【一】【天】【,】【曾】【祖】【父】【问】【爷】【爷】【,】【夜】【郎】【在】【哪】【里】【?】【爷】【爷】【说】【在】【贵】【州】【。】【曾】【祖】【父】【问】【贵】【州】【有】【多】【大】【?】【爷】【爷】【说】【贵】【州】【有】【几】【十】【个】【夜】【郎】【大】【。】【曾】【祖】【父】【眯】【着】【双】【眼】【,】【琢】【磨】【了】【许】【久】【,】【无】【法】【想】【象】【,】【叹】【了】【口】【气】【说】【:】【“】【要】【是】【能】【走】【出】【去】【看】【看】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【该】【有】【多】【好】【。】【”】【曾】【祖】【父】【朝】【思】【暮】【想】【,】【想】【了】【几】【十】【年】【,】【最】【终】【没】【有】【见】【到】【天】【外】【的】【天】【。】【带】【着】【遗】【憾】【、】【带】【着】【期】【盼】【离】【开】【了】【世】【界】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【祖】【父】【走】【了】【,】【爷】【爷】【继】【续】【做】【着】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【梦】【,】【不】【同】【的】【是】【爷】【爷】【开】【始】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【立】【志】【实】【现】【他】【父】【亲】【的】【愿】【望】【。】【爷】【爷】【通】【过】【自】【己】【的】【研】【究】【和】【实】【践】【,】【终】【于】【实】【现】【了】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【梦】【想】【。】【他】【带】【着】【茅】【台】【酒】【,】【带】【着】【曾】【祖】【父】【的】【自】【尊】【与】【自】【信】【,】【在】【巴】【拿】【马】【万】【国】【博】【览】【会】【上】【荣】【获】【金】【奖】【。】【从】【此】【夜】【郎】【誉】【满】【全】【球】【,】【让】【天】【外】【的】【人】【们】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【几】【何】【时】【,】【平】【坦】【的】【道】【路】【,】【发】【达】【的】【通】【信】【,】【为】【夜】【郎】【人】【架】【起】【了】【挑】【战】【世】【界】【的】【平】【台】【。】【爷】【爷】【问】【父】【亲】【,】【你】【知】【道】【天】【外】【有】【多】【大】【?】【父】【亲】【说】【天】【外】【还】【有】【天】【。】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【父】【亲】【做】【着】【和】【爷】【爷】【同】【样】【的】【梦】【。】【父】【亲】【朝】【思】【暮】【想】【,】【勤】【学】【苦】【练】【,】【终】【于】【在】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【北】【京】【奥】【运】【会】【拳】【击】【4】【8】【公】【斤】【级】【比】【赛】【中】【获】【得】【金】【牌】【,】【让】【世】【界】【见】【证】【了】【夜】【郎】【男】【孩】【的】【奇】【迹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【这】【个】【成】【语】【,】【是】【因】【为】【它】【激】【发】【了】【我】【祖】【祖】【辈】【辈】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【与】【自】【豪】【感】【,】【激】【发】【了】【他】【们】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【、】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【的】【信】【心】【和】【勇】【气】【。】【他】【们】【让】【我】【受】【到】【了】【熏】【陶】【与】【教】【育】【,】【更】【让】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【天】【有】【多】【大】【,】【心】【就】【有】【多】【大】【。】【同】【时】【,】【不】【要】【骄】【傲】【,】【随】【时】【想】【到】【自】【己】【的】【责】【任】【,】【才】【能】【为】【人】【类】【的】【进】【步】【与】【发】【展】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【构】【思】【奇】【特】【,】【托】【物】【言】【志】【。】【作】【者】【跨】【越】【时】【空】【,】【构】【思】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【孙】【四】【代】【人】【的】【梦】【想】【逐】【步】【实】【现】【的】【故】【事】【,】【演】【绎】【了】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【的】【特】【殊】【含】【义】【,】【借】【夜】【郎】【人】【挑】【战】【天】【外】【的】【天】【,】【创】【造】【奇】【迹】【的】【信】【心】【和】【勇】【气】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【作】【者】【“】【天】【有】【多】【大】【,】【心】【就】【有】【多】【大】【”】【的】【心】【志】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【叙】【议】【结】【合】【,】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【。】【先】【以】【时】【间】【为】【线】【索】【,】【记】【叙】【了】【夜】【郎】【人】【祖】【孙】【四】【代】【对】【“】【夜】【郎】【自】【大】【,】【不】【知】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【之】【说】【的】【挑】【战】【表】【现】【出】【来】【的】【自】【尊】【心】【、】【自】【豪】【感】【,】【以】【此】【为】【铺】【垫】【,】【然】【后】【发】【表】【议】【论】【,】【点】【明】【观】【点】【。】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【“】【天】【外】【有】【天】【”】【的】【原】【因】【不】【言】【而】【喻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【简】【练】【流】【畅】【,】【平】【中】【见】【奇】【。】【如】【曾】【祖】【父】【与】【爷】【爷】【的】【那】【段】【对】【话】【,】【用】【作】【者】【的】【口】【气】【表】【达】【出】【来】【,】【如】【话】【家】【常】【,】【蕴】【涵】【了】【“】【夜】【郎】【”】【神】【秘】【而】【悠】【远】【的】【历】【史】【背】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【宗】【明】【)】

谈莉娜:好榜样

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【曾】【陪】【我】【穿】【越】【大】【江】【南】【北】【、】【古】【今】【时】【空】【,】【让】【我】【享】【受】【着】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【,】【丰】【盈】【着】【我】【的】【思】【想】【灵】【魂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【颇】【为】【想】【念】【一】【树】【的】【繁】【花】【,】【我】【便】【问】【她】【能】【否】【帮】【助】【,】【她】【笑】【而】【不】【答】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遗】【憾】【地】【低】【头】【,】【再】【次】【抬】【起】【眼】【望】【,】【窗】【外】【微】【雨】【,】【细】【丝】【轻】【叩】【窗】【。】【不】【远】【的】【小】【楼】【中】【有】【人】【轻】【吟】【:】【“】【随】【风】【潜】【入】【夜】【,】【润】【物】【细】【无】【声】【。】【好】【雨】【!】【好】【雨】【!】【”】【低】【首】【回】【眸】【,】【她】【羞】【涩】【一】【笑】【:】【“】【无】【雨】【无】【露】【怎】【可】【浇】【开】【百】【花】【?】【”】【竟】【如】【禅】【语】【。】【黄】【莺】【怯】【生】【生】【的】【啼】【叫】【唱】【响】【了】【晴】【晓】【,】【我】【和】【她】【站】【在】【葱】【绿】【中】【,】【看】【王】【谢】【家】【院】【人】【来】【人】【往】【,】【听】【檐】【下】【新】【燕】【呢】【喃】【,】【“】【快】【了】【!】【”】【她】【指】【着】【墙】【头】【那】【一】【点】【淡】【红】【,】【鼻】【翼】【翕】【动】【,】【竟】【是】【缕】【缕】【墨】【香】【:】【“】【这】【岂】【不】【是】【一】【枝】【独】【秀】【的】【春】【?】【”】【是】【的】【,】【似】【乎】【就】【在】【下】【一】【秒】【,】【那】【枝】【倔】【强】【的】【杏】【花】【就】【要】【唤】【醒】【璀】【璨】【的】【遍】【地】【春】【花】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【南】【小】【镇】【在】【细】【雨】【中】【睡】【意】【正】【浓】【,】【巷】【口】【有】【人】【吆】【喝】【着】【贩】【卖】【杏】【花】【。】【“】【昨】【夜】【风】【疾】【。】【”】【她】【淡】【淡】【道】【。】【南】【方】【的】【花】【都】【走】【在】【前】【头】【。】【落】【红】【也】【可】【谓】【繁】【花】【,】【只】【是】【我】【将】【自】【己】【站】【成】【了】【一】【棵】【树】【—】【—】【那】【个】【徐】【行】【吟】【唱】【的】【诗】【人】【,】【耳】【畔】【仿】【佛】【响】【起】【牧】【童】【在】【清】【明】【时】【节】【纷】【纷】【的】【春】【雨】【中】【吹】【起】【的】【笛】【声】【,】【眼】【前】【空】【濛】【的】【景】【色】【里】【,】【杏】【花】【村】【的】【酒】【气】【带】【来】【感】【念】【与】【忧】【伤】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【随】【我】【来】【!】【”】【她】【的】【脚】【步】【平】【平】【仄】【仄】【,】【舒】【缓】【地】【摆】【弄】【着】【她】【神】【奇】【的】【时】【光】【机】【,】【瞬】【间】【呈】【现】【万】【紫】【千】【红】【,】【黄】【莺】【摆】【脱】【了】【羞】【涩】【,】【千】【里】【莺】【啼】【绿】【映】【红】【。】【蒌】【蒿】【满】【地】【,】【柳】【条】【掠】【过】【水】【面】【,】【春】【江】【水】【暖】【,】【涟】【漪】【轻】【荡】【。】【她】【仿】【佛】【成】【了】【飘】【逸】【的】【渔】【夫】【,】【轻】【舟】【倏】【忽】【,】【欸】【乃】【一】【声】【山】【水】【绿】【,】【手】【指】【处】【万】【紫】【千】【红】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【垂】【眼】【摆】【下】【杏】【花】【酒】【,】【浓】【稠】【的】【香】【,】【瞬】【间】【置】【身】【客】【栈】【,】【简】【陋】【的】【小】【屋】【,】【客】【人】【们】【诉】【说】【着】【各】【自】【思】【念】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【细】【雨】【中】【的】【墓】【园】【久】【久】【地】【镶】【嵌】【在】【窗】【中】【。】【“】【总】【是】【雨】【”】【。】【我】【为】【她】【撑】【起】【江】【南】【素】【花】【伞】【,】【“】【不】【,】【还】【有】【…】【…】【”】【烟】【消】【云】【散】【,】【阳】【光】【倾】【泻】【,】【流】【满】【一】【地】【,】【映】【得】【我】【满】【眼】【泪】【花】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【独】【坐】【书】【房】【,】【茶】【茗】【飘】【香】【,】【漫】【卷】【诗】【书】【,】【不】【觉】【心】【生】【感】【念】【,】【她】【曾】【带】【我】【去】【了】【那】【么】【多】【地】【方】【饱】【览】【美】【景】【,】【体】【味】【浓】【情】【,】【从】【江】【南】【乘】【雁】【去】【塞】【北】【,】【从】【扶】【桑】【起】【程】【登】【天】【山】【。】【蓝】【关】【前】【勒】【马】【踏】【雪】【,】【北】【固】【亭】【凭】【吊】【仲】【谋】【,】【京】【口】【仰】【头】【望】【月】【,】【滕】【王】【阁】【目】【送】【孤】【鹜】【。】【她】【又】【曾】【引】【领】【我】【从】【现】【代】【穿】【越】【春】【秋】【战】【国】【,】【去】【了】【盛】【唐】【,】【到】【了】【晚】【清】【。】【在】【时】【空】【里】【不】【羁】【地】【穿】【梭】【,】【自】【由】【而】【畅】【快】【,】【我】【心】【满】【意】【足】【地】【在】【诗】【歌】【的】【王】【国】【里】【汲】【取】【丰】【富】【的】【营】【养】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【色】【已】【深】【,】【只】【好】【带】【着】【十】【分】【的】【不】【舍】【对】【她】【说】【:】【“】【晚】【安】【,】【诗】【歌】【!】【”】【我】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【走】【向】【卧】【房】【,】【时】【钟】【上】【分】【针】【与】【时】【针】【相】【遇】【,】【你】【明】【天】【会】【带】【我】【去】【哪】【儿】【?】【去】【聆】【听】【毛】【泽】【东】【的】【慷】【慨】【激】【昂】【,】【还】【是】【去】【安】【慰】【闻】【一】【多】【痛】【苦】【的】【心】【?】【“】【诗】【歌】【,】【明】【天】【不】【见】【不】【散】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【穿】【越】【在】【诗】【歌】【的】【丛】【林】【,】【饱】【览】【祖】【国】【胜】【景】【,】【感】【喟】【历】【史】【文】【化】【,】【体】【味】【真】【情】【,】【仰】【望】【高】【尚】【人】【格】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【本】【文】【紧】【扣】【文】【体】【要】【旨】【,】【选】【点】【新】【颖】【独】【到】【,】【内】【容】【全】【面】【丰】【富】【,】【行】【文】【紧】【凑】【,】【“】【穿】【越】【”】【与】【“】【享】【受】【”】【浑】【然】【一】【体】【;】【语】【言】【凝】【练】【晓】【畅】【,】【化】【诗】【入】【文】【,】【隽】【永】【有】【韵】【。】【同】【时】【,】【作】【者】【巧】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【将】【第】【一】【人】【称】【和】【第】【三】【人】【称】【相】【结】【合】【,】【既】【便】【于】【铺】【陈】【描】【写】【,】【也】【适】【于】【自】【然】【抒】【情】【,】【结】【尾】【点】【题】【,】【颇】【有】【智】【慧】【!】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【 】【薛】【海】【潮】【)】

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